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  • Other Re: The Soundtrack of my life.

    I'm completely blown away. I have never read something as deep as this. What you've wrote is something truly spectacular. love is a homeless guy searching for treasure in the ...

    Sep 12, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Music and fury

    Hmm.. interesting poem. Black, Peppermint, ballet-flats; white, couture, purse in hand; the black skinny jeans, the silver-grey tunic, all seem to match in- an odd puzzle still lasts. Walking down ...

    Sep 12, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: I Went Back to Sleep

    I found this poem to be very inspiring. The idea is great! Scorching memories of a day ten years past rose up with the smoke. I think that was the ...

    Sep 12, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Silly Me

    Powerful while dreaming, fool when I'm awake Wow amazing line! That line was really impressive, and completely blew me away. The part about falling in love totally changed the whole ...

    Sep 11, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: I hate now

    This is a very creative poem. I like it ^^. The part where you started writing about a girl, made me open my eyes. I liked that part the best! ...

    Sep 10, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Complications

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    Sep 10, 2011


while she was studying the ways of pasta he was studying the ways of the sword
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