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Sure, I'll help! :D Just PM it to me Shinigazim

Thanks guys, I'm glad you liked it and found it's humour. :P

Hi Aubree! :D I found this quite a humourous short story, but with many grammatical mistakes and problems. I'll just quickly correct it without any explanations as I'm sure you ...

Hi Saphire Earth Gaurdian! Welcome to Young Writers Society! Just to update you with this site's rules and regulations: -- For every two pieces of work you post onto YWS, ...

Hi Ariana Valentine, and welcome to Young Writers Society! You're probably aware of the 2:1 ratio of posting work and reviewing work alreayd, so I won't go into that much ...

Hi Fire of Dawn again! :D Oh ok, I had a strong feeling it was a metaphor. It's a really good one, too! OK, I'm definitely going to go to ...

Hi Mike and welcome to Young Writers Society! (Yes, I know you've joined for two weeks already!) :D The others have already told you the rules, so I won't bother ...

Hi Fire of Dawn! I was going to be your reviewer today, but there doesn't seem to be anything wrong with it! :D I was just wondering whether this was ...

OK, so now the last poem: Tears Held Blackened Fears! :D First of all, I'd like to say this is a really good title for a poem. Good choice and ...

Hi Marshmellow again! I'm going to review the third poem now: One Day. :D One day One day I want to tell you, that I love you, and that my ...

Hi Marshmellow-Warrior! I'll be a reviewer for these poems and for you today! I'm going to reviewer the poems one at a time, so one in each comment I do, ...

Hi Claeren! I shall be your reviewer for today. I apologize for reviewing three days after you posted this essay :D I'm just going to edit it all for you! ...

Hi again, guys! :D MOO! MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! I

Hi Katemabob! Nice name! :D I love your cat, Calibans. He looks cute, despite his great age. I could just snuggle in his fur, but I musn't! XD I agree ...

Hi People of YWS, :D I have just finished reading Harry Potter And The Deathly Hallows for the billionth time! It's such a fantastic book! JK Rowling rawkksss! I can't ...