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Re: The Forever Summer
Hey there! :) I'm happy to review your work. What i'm going to do is re-print your story, and I'll list my specific comments in parentheses as we go, and ...
Jul 12, 2010 -
Re: Making it all ALONE- Chapter One
Heyyy there, Libby. :) Thanks for reading Soulless...Just hope I can help you out a bit with this! For starters, I'm going to go through and just fix grammatical errors ...
Jul 9, 2010 -
Re: Picture Perfect: Chapter One
I like lists. We'll go with a list. :) 1. Again, I enjoy your vocabulary. It makes your piece more interesting. 2. Proofread, and know your commas. Here, I'll fix ...
Jul 9, 2010 -
Re: Sunglasses: Chapter One
Probably the first thing that stuck out to me about this piece was its length. If it's a chapter, it should really take up at least two least in my ...
Jul 9, 2010 -
Re: Friends (rated for possible suggestion)
Hey! I wanted to thank you for the review on Soulless, and also to say I really like what you did with this story. It's creepy in a very direct ...
Jul 8, 2010