Theonewhodreams

Thank you for your comment! I'm sorry, I forgot to say that it is for a story I am writing, and is therefore a made up language. sorry 'bout that. ...

This is very well written, with very nice phrasing. Is it just me, or is the large spaces between the sentences really annoying? Probably just me. ^^ I like the ...

I like this! It does seem to move a little too fast sometimes, but I like the characterization; although, to be honest, there seems to be a little of cliche ...

Arupon Teteruturu toboridanari kuputeru cumru turoru tumbenu endote somito trusdu tembedopa zoqucoso utoreco cupidatnu treside boro tambedopa buzozokutisu dadopa dumisehunudnu tambedopa losikaehei men

This is actually a very nice poem; it uses a lot of good metaphors and is the first example of a fanfiction poem I've come across. But the meter is ...

Before the moon burned, great and bright above those men who, in the night tell tales of fright to children near of Dragon's breath and Dragon's lair It did, when ...