Thekingloliet

First, thank you for reading this! I don't write a lot, so it's fun to see what other people think when I do. Second, I left a lot out on ...

This is a very difficult topic to put into words, and even harder to get ALL of the topic in one poem. Thus, I applaud you for the attempt. I ...

This is a very difficult topic to put into words, and even harder to get ALL of the topic in one poem. Thus, I applaud you for the attempt. I ...

Hello. My name is Natalie. I like editing, so you'll probably see me more posting comments on people's work than writing myself. When I do write, it tends to be ...

Thank you for noticing the end! I purposely wrote this for two reasons: the first was to show that war and hatred are horrible and hurt both sides, and the ...

I'm not going to mention the grammar, because that's already been mentioned. The story has some good things going for it, such as it's high-action and right in the middle ...

The feeling when his sight went out could only be compared to the loss of a best friend or family member. The pain was temporary, but the loss of something ...