Thegirlwholived

Luna sat in her desk, looking around the dull room. Why did everything have to be so blunt and gross looking? She glanced at the lockers, brown and ugly. And ...

*coughs* And, uh, where am I?

I have to disagree with Elanor: I like it just the way it is! Don't go changing it!

I. Love. You. Where. Did. You. get. This.

I'M. IN. LOVE.

How has YWS helped me? I've seen peoples voices, and I've been able to help the ones with sore throats heal. You see, I joined YWS because I needed help. ...

Nice! I enjoyed how this was based on The Lightning Theif! A few things I found though: Engaging in intercourse The syllables here are a bit long and just a ...

As I have found, ALICE is actually Artificial Lingustic Internet Computer Entity. I looked it up. Very facinating :)

Am I allowed to post some comics? Just for the entertainment section :D

I'm in!!! Name: Bonnie McRae Age: 17 Gender: Female Nationality: French Sport: Snow Boarding Appearance: Long, wildly curly hair, and is almost always seen with it in a messy bun ...

Alright, a few things here. I like how you had a free verse, but look at this: Every time I see his face Endless rainbow colors I could take He ...

New life comes to Earth, A baby is born, Her head on pink pillows, Her image adored At five years old, She's beginning to learn, Why the trees change in ...

Woah. No complaints here! Great poem! Your syllables are a bit choppy, and rhymes were sometimes forced, but other that that, great job! Kim

I agree with Vast. PLEASE don't write as if the person were speaking to the reader. it tends to get confusing, and sometimes the reader expects commentary regularly from the ...

Very nice! May I ask what this was based on? Was Alice Lewis Carrol or was Alice just Alice? Confusion D: Kim