Thefadedphotograph

Hunter

On this I don't really need to explain about wether it's a boy or a girl because it's about me. I hinted it earlier when I spoke of my girlfriend. ...

Thanks, everyone for the good reviews. I plan on posting some more of my work so look out for that.

Let's see. The only problemI found in this was that in the beginning I thought that it was a little boy not a little girl, it wasn't until the dad ...

This one was for my girlfriend and it's among the first drawing of its like that I have made. I made this for my Aunt. It's a drawing of her ...

Wow, that was crazy. I love the creativity behind it. I didn't see many errors, it was a very enjoyable read. I found my self confused a lot in the ...

I thought the emotion given to the situation was powerful and understandlable. Overall it was good. It was strong in stating the sitution a lot of overweight teenagers are in, ...

Thanks for the review. I do know that I was decribing a bit too much. It was about things that I do so I went a bit overboard. I don't ...

I'm sure it was mentioned in previous reviews to mine but I couldn't help but to wonder throughout the entire thing if something was going to happen. It was very ...

The way you wrote this story was very understandable; an easy read. I like how that was consistant and it carried through. I find that if one says too much ...

(This is the unfinished first chapter of a story that took place in my life.) The morning sun peaked through the dusted window and ripped at my exposed head above ...

I thought this was a great idea, but a bit to quickly said. There are parts which aren't entirely clear but otherwise it was great and I wanted to read ...

I'm new to this. I fell as if I've already got some good works which I'de like to share with people. I specialize in horror mainly, but I vary between ...