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Re: Marked
Loved the peom. Great work. Good Imagery. Good emotion. AT first I found my self wrapped around someone and the one he loves and then it all changed when I ...
Jun 27, 2010 -
Re: Tootie Fruity (Contest)
Awwwesome. I loved it. Sounded like a nursery rythmn but better. :D Although I do like nursery rythmns---some of them.
Jun 23, 2010 -
Re: Twenty Years
I really loved this peice but I had only one problem with it. He kissed me once, you know. The one I told you about before. Kissed me after school, ...
Jun 22, 2010 -
Re: Sketches? Photos?
I really like the sketches. The dogs both remind my of my pitbull, Muska. I thought one of em had a funny looking jaw though. :D As far as the ...
Jun 19, 2010 -
Re: light up
I liked the rythmn. I liked the poem. Even though it was very short it was good writting---to me. :D When I got half way through it I was thinking, ...
Jun 19, 2010 -
Re: Silver Moon
Thanks for the review everyone. I did realize the rythm of it was a bit choppy but I just wrote from my heart and kept it as I made it ...
Jun 19, 2010 -
Re: Silver Moon
She is my sliver moon, She is my guiding light through times of night. I can't escape her, I can't ever let her go. She is my one true comfort, ...
Jun 18, 2010 -
Re: The Death of a Nobody
Haha. Funny thing for the UPS guy to hand someone a coconut. Shouldn't it have been in a box for someone to open?
Jun 18, 2010 -
Re: The Death of a Nobody
I take that back. It wasn't lacking. It was just a bit confusing.
Jun 17, 2010 -
Re: The Death of a Nobody
I honestly enjoyed the imagery in this and respected it but throughout the entire story I could help but wonder what was going on. Maybe I was reading it to ...
Jun 17, 2010 -
Re: Fog in the Garden (Chapter One)
The kitchen was splayed with trash and mess. In one corner was small table littered with ancient soda cans and wrenches. A dim light hit the table from an oddly ...
Jun 6, 2010 -
Re: Busy Jack Frost
I really love these kind of pictures. The first was my favorite but the others were really good to. I love how the time of day you chose to take ...
Jun 6, 2010 -
Re: With Arms Around the Engine (My Biggest Project So Far)
I thank all of you who gave good reviews dealy, and I'll inform you when I post something else. Until then have a good life! :D
Jun 4, 2010 -
Re: The Moon
I liked it. It reminds me of something I would have thought up about a year ago when I took a fancy on bright sights, such as slivers of silver ...
May 31, 2010 -
Re: The Great Kidnapping
All these . . . hmm. I liked the one with Muffuria written in the sky above the Barber Shop/ Colorful Hair Gel On Top looking city. Otherwise I just ...
May 31, 2010
