Thefadedphotograph

This was really interesting and all, but at the point were she goes into the class and meets this guy who is the teachers nephew I started droning off in ...

I loved the story, but I did think it was lacking a little bit of emotion. But overall it was great. I think some parts could have been more scary. ...

I realized I made a lot of errors when writing this. So I'll fix it later. This was only a prologue, not the whole story.

The last three stanza where what caught my attention the most. I liked the rythmn and the emotion there. Through and through. This was rather good, but I find that ...

Some years ago me and this wonderous girl named Savannah with lustrous blonde hair, stellar eyes, amazing . . . skin, and stunning features, would sit by an isolated brook ...

Well. :D It's a start. These all seem like doodles to me. You know me. I'm picky with my art because of the skills that I have --- not saying ...

This sucks. My computer wont let me see the drawings. I'm sure there really good though. I love pokemon. At least, I used to. I still do actually. Oh well.

Thanks. (:

I loved it. The emotion was palpable. There was never a part in it where I was uninterested. I loved that about it; I was constantly interested. Stephen King, Dean ...

My wife was my own construction her parts found from different graves all of them putrid and dead I stiched the head to the neck and then put together the ...

Thanks. I'll fix that. I kind of thought there was something wrong when I read over all of those line breaks.

I liked it. eight out of ten. I take two off because I didn't really understand to much of what was going on. Good job though. Keep going with it. ...

-My Lifeboat- Hearts made of stone sinking below falling down low cracking their hosts' skulls . . . all of these lonely souls wanting to be loved But there are ...

I liked it. Good job. At times I felt as if things where being repeated in with a different use of words. Sometimes the rythmn wouldn't play along that well ...

Wow. I really found myself capticated with this. Overall it was great. A few typos but no biggy. In the beginning I didn't have clue as to what was going ...