The_Vizier

Hey there. Reading your poem was a tad difficult honestly. But i believe (earnestly) that i made some headway regarding this matter after a few reads and some pondering. Your ...

Hey there. Reading your poem was a tad difficult honestly. But i believe (earnestly) that i made some headway regarding this matter after a few reads and some pondering. Your ...

Hey there. A very nice simple poem. I got not much to complain, but there was one thing that I felt seemed a little awkward here :- My eyes are ...

UNTITLED #2 Waded feet skirt the wind, Hot winds blow, unhindered. The sun shines; Unaccustomed boats flee towards the shore.; The heat driving them home. The sea is a big ...

though not disagreeing with alexandraisonfire's views, i will have to differ a little here. you see the only problem i find with your work, leaving the rhythm aside ( in ...

There's a time when love'S labor is lost. it seems "a certain someone" proved to be a great motivation. Bravo. But i will concede here that, it took me a ...

LAST VERSES OF A MAN ADRIFT IN A SEA The open sea ahead, a shimmering mirror; The vast expanse of infinite waters Whispers that the horizon Awaits me, to reach ...

[b]UNTITLED #1 Whispering wind’oer the moon. Then she blows silent moon. There she sails through the sky; Then she knew I would lie; Waiting till the whisperer awoke, Till the ...

Hey ya my man, yes you are a "man". Your poem is the outcome of a complex mature thought process, that's for sure. your poem seems to reflect a reality ...

It was a nice and subtle poem. It reminds me of the pressures we face each days of our lives be they peer pressures , parental expectation , or even ...