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Re: You
ok for someone who doesnt write poetry you have done a hell of a job my friend!!!!! i mean seriously!!!!! its amazing!!!! you should totally write poetry more often i ...
May 15, 2009 -
Re: My angel
oh my goodness!!!!!! this is an amazing piece!!!! you could not have made it any more touching. the emotion the reader experiences while reading this is undescribeable!!!!! there is so ...
May 15, 2009 -
Re: Last Day of My Love
i love this poem it makes me feel as if i am you when i am reading it as if i feel every emotion that you feel it is hard ...
May 15, 2009 -
Re: Mirror
OK all of the reviews that i just read are pretty dire and frankly i dont agree with them to start with when i read the title: i thought wow ...
May 15, 2009 -
Re: What he doesn't know
this poem is very good although there are some slight mistakes it is nothing to worry about and make sure criticisms from other people do not stop you from writing.. ...
May 15, 2009 -
Re: Imperfection
i love the simplicity of this poem and how it shows that the imperfections of something is what makes it unique and amazing! i am very impressed by this i ...
May 15, 2009 -
Re: The mind of one
The Mind Of One A dark shadow creeps beneath The surface of my mind. Feeding on the little sanity remaining. I can't hrelp but wonder, what will happen to me ...
May 15, 2009 -
Re: Pain
Pain Sharp needles piercing my body. intense heat scolding my skin. thin wire shredding my tendons. Pain. Family abandon me. Friends desert me. "They" exile me. Pain. Locked alone in ...
Apr 25, 2009
