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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Chapter 1 - The Memory Key

    Yo, Gotta be honest, the first few paragraphs nearly turned me away from this. Opening a story with huge chunks of factual information is rarely a good idea. You're better ...

    May 3, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Mirror prologue

    Hey, Contrary to the others, I liked the amount of dialogue. Granted, you need some "meat" as they said, but that doesn't need to be in the form of direct ...

    May 3, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Demonic Flare Chapter 1: Stuck with a Beast

    Hey, So this was pretty cool, and I enjoyed reading. Never got much into gaming myself, but I wasn't lost, and a story's a story. Getting sucked into a video ...

    May 3, 2011


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