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Re: Chapter 1 - The Memory Key
Yo, Gotta be honest, the first few paragraphs nearly turned me away from this. Opening a story with huge chunks of factual information is rarely a good idea. You're better ...
May 3, 2011 -
Re: Mirror prologue
Hey, Contrary to the others, I liked the amount of dialogue. Granted, you need some "meat" as they said, but that doesn't need to be in the form of direct ...
May 3, 2011 -
Re: Demonic Flare Chapter 1: Stuck with a Beast
Hey, So this was pretty cool, and I enjoyed reading. Never got much into gaming myself, but I wasn't lost, and a story's a story. Getting sucked into a video ...
May 3, 2011
