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Re: Looking Glass
Auteur: Pourquoi avez-vous écrit votre revue en français? Nous sommes curieuses. Dalliance: je pense que c'est un peu trop long, ce serait plus efficace si c'etait plus courte.
May 26, 2010 -
Re: This is no longer a poem
A story with words, the rhymes and binds Your feet to the wall. stuck vertically It won’t fall, this un-poem, into your lap So you’d better jump up and search ...
May 26, 2010 -
Re: I state. She said.
The fat cat on the mat snoozes, as I state .I didn’t know forks could get bruises. So my spindles and tongs which delve into my fish finger Have not ...
May 13, 2010 -
Re: Centipede.
I find this centepede business quite interesting, and i like it i reckon. however, i feel you should go more into the ways of the centepede and less into the ...
May 12, 2010 -
Re: My Partner in Poetry
To start. Not an easy thing. Do I question? Do I state? Do I personify this plate? I have not yet started tapping those keys; forming those letters and words ...
May 12, 2010 -
Re: Is It Wrong?
i am ashamed that you havnt managed to write one in under a minute, thats how we roll. its a challenge. try it.
May 12, 2010 -
Re: String Cheese
cheese makes me sick, not in any form. not even string, sorry about the bees and all that.
May 12, 2010 -
Re: John McCain
Obamama is gonna ring nick Clegg to congradulate him of his new PMness, oh wait i mean David Cameron. oh Dimbleby
May 12, 2010 -
Re: The Empowerment
i feel like the first four stanza's were the same thing, and then you forgot how to finish. you should have used copy and paste. heres this though, i like ...
May 12, 2010 -
Re: Cry for me
hats off to you sir, this is boss. the thrilling unsensical style is a marvel, again i say hats off. heres the other two cence. i absoluteally love this, and ...
May 12, 2010 -
Re: Hypotheses
I’ve chewed And stewed And I brewed And I concluded Our hypotheses. We are growing, we have swallowed knowledge Shame it can’t be regurgitated for you darling. And we think ...
May 10, 2010 -
Re: 30 April 7:54am.
We are too in sickness to express ourselves The time has surpassed 7.54am, In fact it’s 11:34am And I still cannot submit my literary work My life is over
May 10, 2010 -
Re: Words
A Poem about Words Preach! My minister. Your pretentious drivel Makes me feel a bit sickle Sorry but my words attack Please duck and cover We denounce your life and ...
May 5, 2010 -
Re: Poem about Poetry
A Poem about Poem about Poetry This Poem, about poetry connotes to me, the feeling of us I see the hidden message and it makes me want to jump This ...
May 5, 2010 -
Re: And I’ll give you chocolate
Dedicated to Alex Think. And Think a bit more. About her situation Nobody has a drink I take it and is void of a cold or any disease And she ...
May 4, 2010
