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Re: Doofus Detectives Ch 5 : Locked.
This chapter, like the others, was good. However, there were a few grammar things, that don't really affect the comprehension of the story, but I'm going to point them out. ...
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Re: Doofus Detectives Ch 4 : Only Rich People Get Murdered.
This chapter was pretty good. It feels like this was a dip in the plot, only meant to develop character dynamics and the next chapter with the end. I like ...
May 25, 2025