TheTruthLiesWithin

Hey! :) First off, welcome to YWS! Hope you'll like it here :D I'm Truth and I shall be your reviewer today :) --If you haven't yet noticed, I love ...

Hey! So, I'm pretty sure Kafka pointed it all out for the corrections I would suggest. So I'll leave you with this: Here there's nothing capitalized at all, and it's ...

Hello there :) I'm Truth, here for a full review on your novel! Let's start, shall we? PS: Don't be intimidated by all the red, it's all small things that ...

Whoa lots of posts! Haha, I shall review :D Let's start with Said Disease , shall we? I think if my cheeks were slit, and handcuffs locked inside, hooking my ...

Hey Dudette :) Truth here to review! So first off, I would like to point out how you are narrating in past tense, and keeping it quite constant... This one, ...

Ok, not my strongest piece but had a lot of writers block. Plus I dont know if you count this as romantic or not. Anyway hope you enjoy! :) Everyone ...

Hello Storygirl :) I'm Truth and I shall review your poem! My famous last words were in the witching hour, too scared too speak , comma I sat back. With ...

Hello there :) Truth here for a review! Let's start with the nitpicking, shall we? Numbers on both sides were dwindling fast as the battle raged on. It wouldn't be ...

Hello :) Truth here for a review! A grain of sand, a drop of blood - the bindings of a world forsaken by the lost, taken by the wealthy, and ...

Hello :) Truth here for a review! So first, I must say that this is really good for a first draft. I miss what once had been, crave what will ...

Hello Dragon :) Truth here to review! This looks very promising, I like. I would only like to point out that you use a period to seperate your narration from ...

Hello there :) I'm Truth, here for a review. the angel nobody appreciated, sits alone in the park, Since the rest is in present tense, I would recommend staying with ...

Hello :) Truth here, nice to meet you. Alright, onto the review... Your off-pitch laugh carried itself through the dying and decaying trees. This was paradise. A dead forgotten place, ...

Hey :) Truth here for a review! First off... The verb tenses is changing are changing quite a bit in there... red= present, blue= past My feet hit the pavement ...

Here lies the tale, Of a girl long ago, Rest in pieces , comma young lady, It ' s payment you owe. Young girl of nineteen, Only daughter of three, ...