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  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: The Mind of an Analyst

    Dear Charizard821, Thankyou for being patient and waiting. Well let me start off with this short little review. At first glance I was hoping it was going to explain why ...

    May 5, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Tomato

    Dear Charizard821, To be honest I have your full username Memorized now. I have fallen in love with your poetry and this one just made me fall even harder. The ...

    May 3, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Roses and Violets Speak Volumes of You

    Dear Charizard821, I must say that this is also an amazing piece by you and that I honestly saw now errors when reading through it. So let me tell you ...

    May 3, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Sugar-Coated Melody

    Dear Bambi, This piece was very interesting and heart touching. I was able to see a scene and a movie going on in my mind while reading the poem. I ...

    May 1, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Stoneslide - Chapter 11

    Dear Author, I will be honest with you, I skipped the other chapters and was very confused with what I just read. However, that is actually a good thing. Some ...

    May 1, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, Spiritual Re: I don't aim at heaven

    Dear Author; I would like to start by saying that I have been inactive for a while now and this is my first review since returning. To be honest I ...

    Apr 24, 2015
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: When A Loved One Passes (First Post)

    Dear Friend, I am proud to be able hko review this work,but I am not going to write anything in my review that will help you out in your writing. ...

    Jan 25, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Consumed

    Dear Author, I am not going to tell you that you have made any mistakes, because poetry, is not designed to be perfectly constructed. I must say, however, that this ...

    Jan 23, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: Arctic Flower- Chapter One

    Dear Author, I must admit, I would buy this book when you finish it. I mean of course there are some spelling and grammar checks, but I am not going ...

    Jan 23, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Action / Adventure Re: The Saiyan and the Avatar

    Dear Author,   I must admit that I absolutely hated reading this piece of literature. It was not because of the story or even the idea, but because of your ...

    Jan 23, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Pressure

    Dear Sylar14, I'm going to be completely honest I found this piece of literature to be a bit disappointing. However, I only feel like that, because of the writing style. ...

    Jan 22, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The Sun Will Rise

    Dear Charizard, I must say that this poem, just changed my mood for the day. My car was just repossessed, and I was losing faith in the people of this ...

    Jan 22, 2015
  • Short Story » Literature, General Re: The Man Behind A Mirror

    Dear QuentintheSad, I'm going to start by apologizing, I was way to interested in the story. Therefore, I didn't find any errors or mistakes. I did however, love the way ...

    Jan 20, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Spiritual Re: Hellbound

    I must say that I have never been able to find a well written piece of poetry, over this particular subject. However, I'm quite impressed with your writing style and ...

    Jan 20, 2015


Find wonder in the everyday, find everyday language to articulate it.
— Maurice Manning