TheSweetSongOfGrace

Thank you for the review Honora. I am working on fixing the details right now and hope to have an updated version soon. Have a great day! Your friend, Grace

Thank you so much for that review Fanta! I will try to fix those things and no you definitely did not offend me. :) I appreciate the negative criticism because ...

I accidentally clicked post on that last comment and didn't finish it. Lol.

Thank you so much for that great review! I will definitely take your thoughts into consideration and try to fix those things. I am still new to writing so I ...

Hello fellow yws writers! Hope you are doing well. I just wanted to say this- when reviewing please be honest. I am open to all thoughts on my writing because ...

This is amazing! It has rhythm and flows throughout the whole poem. Everything makes sense! I would definitely recommend it to read. Keep writing! You made great edits to it ...

Just the first few sentences had me hooked! Great Job! Definitely would recommend this story for others to read!