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Re: A Problem with Plot
Hello, and thanks for your reply :) You've given some very good points about the distraction to focus and the minimising of character and world building, which i have already ...
Sep 13, 2012 -
Re: A Problem with Plot
Hi and thanks, The dreams act as a foretelling event which show the character in the main plot (similarly) what is going to happen to her. The story can progress ...
Sep 10, 2012 -
Re: A Problem with Plot
Good day everyone. I have something to ask you all, and I would appreciate your opinions. Recently, I expanded the story within my novel, now this means that the overall ...
Sep 10, 2012 -
Re: The Sun Children V Appendices
(I added a new picture of the sword 'Nethersedge' above) There has been quite a significant amount of wok done as of late on the story. I will explain what ...
Sep 9, 2012 -
Re: The Sun Children V Appendices
Hi aqua! hehe thanks for the comment, but may i ask why? i just put in a lot of work that's all :wink: I thought today i'd speak about some ...
Sep 2, 2012 -
Re: The Sun Children V Appendices
Going a bit more in depth now with this background. as well as the history behind two of the darkest wars ever fought, i have now dealt with the religious ...
Aug 27, 2012 -
Re: The Sun Children V Appendices
I have put off posting an update for a while, just so that i can finish a bit more background work. Meanwhile i have been busy in re-writes. Chapters 4 ...
Aug 16, 2012 -
Re: The Sun Children V Appendices
Ok, so i am skipping the other architecture for now and getting straight to what appendices are supposed to be for, the background stories. in due time i'll attach pictures ...
Jul 31, 2012 -
Re: The Sun Children V Appendices
After managing to write around 14500 words in one week I realised that I am making substantial progress in terms of how far I am to finishing. If I can ...
Jul 29, 2012 -
Re: The Sun Children V Appendices
Hi DudeMcGuy! I hope it is a ride you'll enjoy to say the least :D Map making isn't that hard when you learn the basics, as for the drawing, i ...
Jul 22, 2012 -
Re: The Sun Children V Appendices
Hey Kyllorac! its always good to know someone's keeping a look out :wink: thanks for your kind words :P Now i've got 6 weeks off, not only will i attempt ...
Jul 21, 2012 -
Re: The Sun Children V Appendices
Chapter 12 and 13 are complete. well, additional scenes are being added to 13, but it is done nonetheless. I now take it in turns to write different parts. some ...
Jul 15, 2012 -
Re: The Sun Children V Appendices
Hi Rubric! thanks for your comment, means a lot to me hearing someone say something like that. good thing is, is that i really enjoy designing and painting this armour! ...
Jul 5, 2012 -
Re: The Sun Children V Appendices
Just continuing on from the last post now. The two sets of armour here consist of Arzutarian (from the fifth age of Osirigardin) the other is the Nyshuhrian (from the ...
Jul 1, 2012 -
Re: The Sun Children V Appendices
Been hard at work lately, managed to finish chapter 11, added a 12th chapter featuring a major battle and have now began to design the armour and some of the ...
Jul 1, 2012
