TheSunChildren

Hey guys, i think this is the right place to put this.. basically, just say your favourite monty python sketches (or films) i know there are other hardcore pythons out ...

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for the past 6 years i have been a fanatic of 1890s-1960s ocean liners. especially the 1900s-1910s era. here is perhaps the best 3d model of a ship i ever ...

A while back i had an absolute obsessions with MPHG and the Holy Grail (i still do) and went as far as to remake a third of the film using ...

'Ello, just saw your reply on my wall, i 'think' and i mean 'think' my story is ready for reviewing, if you could give me an analysis of characters and ...

ooh really? interesting :pirate2: . i never played oblivion, but i played skyrim and its the best damn game i have ever played! 8)

This is the main focus from my first 6 chapters of TFP, you can read the prologue and history of Arzutare here: nothing much exciting to look at at the ...

edit: never mind i got this!

This is a 3d-model i made a while back of the street featured in the beginning of my novel, and also a rendered picture of a single house. i know ...

Hi, thanks for your reply it has helped quite a bit! i would post this on the browse part but its already in my first chapter on there and people ...

Hi all, for those who have read the first chapter of my novel will probably have realised that the prologue is rather confusing. i have had some say it needs ...

ooh, i got this Flesch-Kincaid Grade level: 91. Flesch-Kincaid Reading Ease score: -555. is that good? bad? :shock: :? lol thats odd, what i tried was the beginning of chapter ...

Hi and welcome to the forum! I am trying to get multiple reviews on this from different people to see what different minds think of it and see if someone ...

Oh i completely understand! don't worry about that, if i'm not careful this story will corrupt my own school life anyway :shock: hehe, thanks! take as long as you like, ...

Hi, i like this setup of packages hehe, if you're still running these would you mind performing a Quick Critique on the below link please, much appreciated if you could ...