TheStorm

~The Holocaust is a very tough subjet to write about, but you definently did it justice! The last line is a great finish! Good Job. I love it!

~Thanks everyone for you ideas. I do agree now looking back that it did sound very forced and I realize I used some very vague discriptions. Thanks again!(:

~Alyson, thanks so much for the review, and I would love to hear you suggestions~(: Scarlett, I'm glad you enjoyed it(:

~Kightley Thanks so much for the review, I agree that I ramble. I just kind of whipped this poem up!(: Thanks for the tips, I'm so new to writing and ...

I dream a dream, over and over, of a place far far away, please take me there, oh how I wish you would, things are much different, for you, and ...

Him I see him in the first thing every day, And after he watches me walk away ~ I get those little things That they call butterflies ~ His mouth ...