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Re: Untitled
Thank you for looking at this. I would love for you to comment. Thanks again! The wind ruffled everything. She sat there on her blanket. The trodden fall leaves that ...
Sep 22, 2011 -
Re: 6 feet under
Hello, I really love how you describe things. Some people over describe things but you keep it simple yet beautiful. For me it was a mix of emotions including saddness, ...
Mar 7, 2011 -
Re: Sweet Alamine
I stumbled across this in my computer files. I thought it was alright but I know it needs work. Miranda “Does she realize that her skirt is way to short?” ...
Mar 7, 2011 -
Re: Nightmare
I have the strangest dreams, or in this case nightmares, sometimes. I hope you like it but I have to warn you it is kind of scary. Well at least ...
Mar 7, 2011 -
Re: Harry Potter 3OH!3 song parody
~~I totally love all of you parodies!(: keep up the fantastic worrkk!
Apr 11, 2010 -
Re: Us Pirates We're Hardcore ( a Tik Tok by Ke$ha parody)
~~I loveee thiss(: I'm going to have it stuck in my head all dayy!
Apr 11, 2010 -
Re: New
I fill the nights Driving around No where in sight Not even a sound ~ Just trying to forget But it's not that easy That's something people don't get The ...
Apr 7, 2010 -
Re: The Travelin' Cowboy
Hey everyone, this is written in sonnet form, but I know it doesn't fit a sonnet theme. The man stumbled into the empty bar So very tired, yet so wide ...
Apr 4, 2010 -
Re: WWII fictional biography
This is my first story. i was inspired by WWII soldiers and decided to write this. :thud: :elephant: :xd: :roll: :lol: CHAPTER ONE Krak-Boom! “Must be a storm coming.” I ...
Apr 3, 2010 -
Re: a dream
Jemjive-thanks so much!(:
Apr 2, 2010 -
Re: I'll be a Sparrow
~I love this, I can really picture someone flying in the sky as a sparrow!
Apr 1, 2010 -
Re: Submission Call For YWS News!
~Where do I sumbit something?
Apr 1, 2010 -
Re: am I...myself?
~This has to be one of the best poems I have ever read. It shows the pain and the comfort of addiction, which is something most people don't understand! I ...
Apr 1, 2010 -
Re: An Ink pen.
~These pictures are amazing! One thing I have never been able to do is draw. My favorite would have to be the skeleton, and I think the skyscraper makes the ...
Apr 1, 2010 -
Re: Elizabethian Sonnet: Bleeding
~I love this sonnet! My only complaint is the ending, it seems that the last line has one to many syllables. Other then that I love it, I got lost ...
Apr 1, 2010
