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Re: Better Without You
I like how your poem became a sort of quasi letter. I thought it was clever how you injected hellos every now and then into your poem as if you ...
Nov 19, 2017 -
Re: winter has a hundred names
First of all I'm feeling your font choice 100%. Second I really love the metaphors you use for winter. They really capture the different ways we interpret the wintertime. The ...
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Re: Falling Stars
I love the juxtaposition of the images you present of the night sky. It's a good representation of how whimsical and foreboding the night sky can be at times. My ...
Nov 19, 2017 -
Re: Footprints in the Woods
There is just something about the structure of the poem that intrigues me. I also really enjoy the imagery you evoke. Additionally, it's interesting how in this poem "growing up" ...
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Re: Dearer as they Fade
I love the message of your poem. I understood it to be that our hopes/dreams/aspirations are often neglected to the point where once we are in a position to try ...
Nov 19, 2017
