TheShattering

Okay, thank you for your feedback, it's my first flash fiction. I will definitely make those changes, i see what you mean, now that i reread it i feel like ...

Yes it was, the effects of death. Thank you for your feedback :]

thanks, your review helped! :]

Really good, i don't normally read poetry but this is really good. Love the imagery, just the fact that its dark and depressing and that you totally OWNED it. Good ...