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  • Writers Corner Re: One Life Remaining - Suggestions?

    I'll try to keep this as brief as possible without spitting around the general idea, since of course, it is late and nobody likes reading a block of text. :smt003 ...

    Apr 14, 2012
  • Writers Corner Re: How do people feel about 'bad' endings...

    Well in my experiences, Stories/Movies/Novels where the Villain ends up winning is sort of like a train wreck. You just can't look away, although you want to. Just like you've ...

    Feb 20, 2012
  • Writers Corner Re: An Experiment: Multiple Authors

    It's always been an interesting idea in my mind. What if you took a handful of Authors (three to five) with a plot and theme that was generally agreed upon ...

    Feb 12, 2012
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: The Tale of The White Book

    Thanks for the reveiew! It's much appreciated. :) I'm not even sure where it came from, and it didn't seem to pertain to the story in the slightest bit. It ...

    Oct 28, 2011
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: The Tale of The White Book

    This was actually one of my assignments for my English class. It was originally assigned as a Children's Story, but I talked my way out of it and converted the ...

    Oct 27, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: River of Tears

    I'm not exactly an experienced writer of Poetry so I can't exactly give you a hard critiquing, but from what I know, the flow of was quite good. I enjoyed ...

    Oct 27, 2011
  • Information Desk Archive Re: Report A Site Bug

    Time of Incident (include your timezone): Unknown. I discovered this at 12:04 EST. Browser: Google Chrome Page You Were On: Describe What Happened: YWS's Site removed the majority of my ...

    Oct 24, 2011
  • Science-Fiction Short Stories Re: Ghost In The Vaults (A Triumvirate Short Story)

    ^ For some reason the site removed more than 3/4th of the Chapter... Which is very odd, it's been up for nearly a month or so now. Re-pasting it from ...

    Oct 24, 2011
  • Science-Fiction Short Stories Re: Ghost In The Vaults (A Triumvirate Short Story)

    Fixed a terrible grammer error in the opening. should be fine overall now.

    Oct 7, 2011
  • Writers Corner Re: 1st person vs. 3rd person?

    I really prefer 3rd person as it allows you to explain everyone's feelings and thoughts to the Reader instead of making them wonder like the main character. Reading the Horus ...

    Sep 28, 2011
  • Writers Corner Re: The Protagonist as a Villain and a Hero

    In one of my current projects I have a character known as "Cipher". In short: Cipher lives in a world with three factions. The Reavers (Evil), Nobles ("Good"), and the ...

    Sep 28, 2011
  • Science-Fiction Short Stories Re: Ghost In The Vaults (A Triumvirate Short Story)

    This is actually the opening of one of my stories in progress. Apart of a larger story known as Triumvirate. Feedback is greatly appreciated since I need to know if ...

    Sep 28, 2011
  • Science-Fiction Short Stories Re: Epsilon: Triple Threat

    Thanks for the review guys! I'll admit, this is more of a crash course than an actual attempt at writing for the current moment. I have the ideas, I just ...

    Aug 5, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Math...mwahahahah

    Great poem! I myself despise math. I completely hate it with a passion and would rather have it removed from the word completely... But that would end in a terrible ...

    Jul 4, 2011
  • Science-Fiction Short Stories Re: Epsilon: Triple Threat

    Apologies to the Forum Moderators. This might be in the wrong section! Not quiet sure whether you would consider this a Novel or Short Story? Greetings everyone! This is actually ...

    Jul 1, 2011


Poetry is my cheap means of transportation. By the end of the poem the reader should be in a different place from where he started. I would like him to be slightly disoriented at the end, like I drove him outside of town at night and dropped him off in a cornfield.
— Billy Collins