TheRedPencil

Hi ServalX, Firstly, thank you for the review! I'll address each point you made separately. The reason that I had any past scenes described through dialogue is because the main ...

Hi Papillote, First I just wanted to say thank you for leaving a comment, it's always nice to see how a piece is received from multiple different people. I did ...

Thank you so much for the feedback! I'm not the best at grammar and your nitpicks were super helpful!!!

Totally feel free to use it and change whatever you like about it! I meant it as a building block so I'm honored that you'd want to use it!