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Re: Please Don't Look At Me
Hey it's TheRealOne here to leave a Real Review. I like the poem since I can really relate to it. The imagery shows someone who feels like an outsider and ...
Nov 16, 2015 -
Re: woman in chains
Hey it's TheRealOne here to leave a real review!:) To begin, I'll restate what others said before, your rhymes seem a bit forced. It is especially present in the "sobbing" ...
Oct 27, 2015 -
Re: I Hate Clocks
Hey it's TheRealOne here to leave you a real review!:) First I like the topic of the poem. It is very relateable since everyone knows the feeling of looking at ...
Oct 27, 2015 -
Re: Dvsdvs
Hey it's Real here to leave a review. Like previously stated I like the rhyme scheme, it's simple yet effective. Also the repetition of Go to sleep, go to sleep ...
Oct 15, 2015 -
Re: Voices
Hey It's Real here to leave a review! I'm going to use the sandwich method for this so I'll tell a good thing, then something you need to fix, and ...
Oct 7, 2015 -
Re: I am From
Hey Twilight! I am here to review. I am form gunmetal From Savage and Colt That opening line is intriguing, but it never really gets explained later. I would have ...
Oct 7, 2015