TheRainFalls

Granted, but now they are starıng wıldly ımagınıng what they could do wıth ıt. I wısh I wasn`t homesıck

Paperclıp (Orange paperclıp ıs my nıckname :P)

I stared at the muddy mess my mum had placed ın front off me. How ın the nameof my holy socks am I supposed to stomach that? I pıcked up ...

It sounds good! I'd like to hear it sung :P Although, if your doing Bridge > Chorus then it's better off to take out the last 'Because' Or other wise ...

It's quite good! JK Rowlibng finished Deathly Hallows far too quickly, so I'm suprised there isn't anymore fanfics... It's good, except... more description would be quite nice :) Maybe try ...

Title ideas???

Very quick! Maybe you should have added more description so it wasn't all in one chapter (Part...) I think you've really rushed us through the story, I'm not quite sure ...

Purses

Granted but He starts making three wishes so everyone gets confused and shoots him with a rifle :P Sorry. I've just had loaaads of sherbert :P Ummm.... I wish I ...

These are so cool! 1. It's an odd picture... It has the good and the bad... I like the branch leaning across the photo with the colours being so vibrant... ...

Heyy... I'd love to join :P Name: Aria (Ar-ee-ah - from Eragon if you watched or read it...) Age: 19 Gender: Female Species: Werecat (Human/Cat) Tranformations: When transforming, it's quick ...

I really like this, I don't think it needs a more defined theme... I like the way it just sticks to what it is... and blows you away with the ...

Wow... no wonder you critiqued so much on my work! 12 and with imagery like this? I bow down to you, master :P I gave you your cherry by the ...

Thanks for the crit :) I didn't realise about the "2 crit posting thing" I'll go crit now :P My teacher picked up on my use of comma's... I can't ...

As a thirteen year old, I don't expect my work to be masterpieces. Which is a good job... seeing as they aren't, but I just wanted to show you guys ...