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Re: Defeated Innocence
What up dawg! I like the progression and the way time elapses in your poem. I can tell that you were going for a disoriented/hazy mood? If I'm wrong, let ...
Dec 13, 2011 -
Re: The Last Hour
I'm a fan of somber poetry, especially in your poem, the way you personify all these abstract ideas is really cool. I would say that, in order to make the ...
Dec 12, 2011
