ThePowerOutage

Hi! I like this story line but not so much the writing. You should try again from scratch using all the critique here. Then post you new version! I can't ...

Hi Patatopie! Another of your nonsensical poems I see. One big nit pick. What is it about? You didn't portray what you were talking about very well. A part from ...

I like this poem! Your writing is different because it doesn't make sense; it only shows one side of a story. When I found you, I lost myself, I give ...

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First I'm going to start off by saying I was... disappointed. Seriously. I have read a lot of your work and I don't think this is your best. Maybe you ...

NEW The Part I Have Already Posted Prologue Beads of sweat were dripping down his arms, and then slowly falling into the crimson pool of blood at his feet. Tom ...

Chapter 2 is a bit slow coming because I have very bad writers block. Should be along soon now I have an opening. Anyway, I hope you enjoy the alternative ...

Hippie you are still a quidnunc. You have just proved it. A quidnunc is... Look it up in a dictionary!

I almost feel sorry for you... Okay, you can have you power back.

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Hippie You are now well and truly in the the dark. I have blotted out the sun! Now to finish making these elephants into my minions to steal your powers. ...

The train stopped and Tom got off. Tom wasn’t his real name; it was just the one he had been given for this mission. He smiled, his eyes shining as ...

Thank hippie and the other dude/dudette. Kyran was muscular before as you will find out later on, he just got back into shape. Later I will put something about his ...

Cresent i managed to pull of a party that lasted 20 mins. Woo Hoo!