ThePhoenix

Thanks! Like everyone else, I will try to make my story better with these criticisms (Idk if that's a word).

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This was a really good chapter and I look forward to the next one. Though I think that switching to the author's perspective suddenly in the very chapter is very... ...

I will try and fix any typos for the next chapter (but there will probably still be errors since I'm really lazy when it comes to rereading my work) and ...

Thnks Fr reviewing! :D If you get that reference I would be so happy.

Thanks! Though for number 7 I kind of stated that the boy was 11. For number five, well, it'll be explained at the end. Probably. For all the others, I'll ...

Also if anyone has a name suggestion for the Archangel then please tell me because I really cannot be bothered to find a good name. I only know girl names ...

Reviews are welcome (obviously) and there won't be a specific schedule for updating but I hope to do it often, perhaps once or twice a week. If I'm unlucky, once ...