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Re: Life
I love this story! It's touching and beautiful! I like how you used " you " instead of "I" or "he" it's different in a spectacular way. It's like an ...
Jan 29, 2011 -
Re: Chains.
Another fantastic story!! I love the topic of racism you chose. Its a topic that I feel needs to be addressed more. All men created equal is one of my ...
Jan 29, 2011 -
Re: And that would be a lie...
I really liked this! You wrote a story that many girls can relate to. I like how you made it more personal to the character by haveing it in her ...
Jan 29, 2011 -
Re: Jerahbeth: preface
Jerahbeth was once known as one of the most fruitful and magnificent kingdoms in all of the world. During this time, called the Golden Age of Jerahbeth, the rein of ...
Jan 29, 2011 -
Re: Into Thin Air - Chapter One (REVISED VERSION AS OF 4/1/11)
I loved your story! I liked the way you discribed the general day of the princess, also added some foreshadowing factors as you did so. I loved how you went ...
Jan 26, 2011 -
Re: Welcome New Members! [2]
Hi I'm Ruth. I live in rural Massachusetts, USA. I've been writing sence I was 10 and I'm also a lover of other Arts, such as Singing, Acting, and playing ...
Jan 25, 2011