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ThePenIsMyWeapon

  • Lyric Poetry Re: A reason, A season

    I really like this! I can relate too, for I also beleve there is a reason for everything. And I also like the biblical-ness of the poem, for I am ...

    Jan 30, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Lily Foxglove Chp 1 part 2

    Ohhh My Goodness! Cliff-hangers!! How I hate/love them! Good job again! I am ackeing to read more, so update soon! Like, really soon. I really really liked this one! You ...

    Jan 30, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Lily Foxglove Chp 1 Part 1

    I really liked this. I am dying to read more, and I think I will :) I like how the character is daring and adventurous, and trying to solve a ...

    Jan 30, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Puppy

    I really like this, it is sweet and touching. I like how with each stanza, it is a different time period. I also like how alot of dog lovers can ...

    Jan 30, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Three women and a blank page

    I really really like this! I like the dramatic irony you used at the end of each stanza. And I like how it's short and sweet, I'll admit that if ...

    Jan 30, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: A Child's Fear - Chapter 1

    I really liked this story you have made. It was mysterious, no doubt, and also very foreshadowing. I like the two different monsters, both with different text, and the fact ...

    Jan 30, 2011
  • Other Re: Grandiose Start of Nothing

    I really like this. It made me smile a bit. It's kinda like " I don't care what people think, I'm gonna express my self. And I'll do it the ...

    Jan 30, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Dreams Tell Lies - Chapter One

    I really really liked this. This was ominous and eerie and it leaves me on endge. The reasonings of this mystery person is unknown to me but it's touching just ...

    Jan 30, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: The Singer- Accompanying Poem to my Novel

    I like this. Short and sweet. It's very eerie like, but it's probably cause I havent read your book, but oh well. I am very puzzles by your ' our' ...

    Jan 30, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: A Treasure Passed

    I really really like this poem of yours! It's short, sweet, and beautiful. :) I love how you appreciate life and nature and express it in your work for the ...

    Jan 30, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: A Lesson In Love

    I really really like this! It's beautiful! It makes me emotional; and I'm sure alot of people can relate to this. It's touching, even. And I love how you added ...

    Jan 30, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Jerahbeth: preface

    Thanks guys for reviewing!! I shall fix my errors soon. I'm on my iPod at the moment so it's hard. And yes, I included in the book description why it's ...

    Jan 30, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Should I keep writing this?

    You should continue! I loved this! It's a story many can relate to, includeing myself. I notice you don't all your stories, though you shouldnt! You good! We all have ...

    Jan 30, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Jerabeth, Chapter 1: 2 thousand years later. 

    Sorry I clicked the wrong genre, it's suppost to be fantasy Chapter 1: 2 thousand years later.  After a long 2thousand years, soon to be called the Dark Ages, there ...

    Jan 29, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Boy and His Moon

    I love this story! It's cute and lovable and full of imagination, like a childhood story you would tell a child before they go to bed. It must be inspireing ...

    Jan 29, 2011


The bigger the issue, the smaller you write. Remember that. You don’t write about the horrors of war. No. You write about a kid’s burnt socks lying on the road. You pick the smallest manageable part of the big thing, and you work off the resonance.
— Richard Price