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Re: My Song
i really liked this! It's very beautiful, steady, and inspiring! THis is comeing from me, who usually ignores poetry. I like it and all, I just don't 'get it'. Well, ...
Feb 23, 2011 -
Re: I Was There
I'm sorry it took so long for me to reveiw. But I'm glad to inform you that I loved your story! First, the bad stuff: He noted her longing look ...
Feb 23, 2011 -
Re: Pain is good
See the first story here: Close to suicide, I was. Close to suicide, I’ve been. Close to death, face to face And welcomed him in. Then there you were, When ...
Feb 19, 2011 -
Re: Potential Love Story?
Just had a sudden burst of creativity flow through me. Maybe this could turn into a Romance Novel? What do you think? White. That’s all I see. Even though it’s ...
Feb 13, 2011 -
Re: Into Thin Air - Chapter Two (in progress!)
Oh, this is amazing! Sorry I have been procrastinating in my reviews, I regret it now that I have read this! How marvelous your work is! This chapter is really ...
Feb 13, 2011 -
Re: Jerabeth chapter 2: an elf named Sarah
Okay, sorry it's taken so long, and I hope you like this. I plan on going back and editing my previous chapters. This definately isn't my best work, but I'm ...
Feb 12, 2011 -
Re: I'll reveiw your Love stories and more!
Hey I'm Ruth! Here are things I am willing to reveiw: Action: This is one of the things I'm best at!! Romance: I'm good at this too. But there are ...
Feb 3, 2011 -
Re: Dine at the 'Review Restaurant' [OPEN]
Could you review my story please? It's called Jerabeth. It's not a toootal fanasty, it has no magic or whatever. It's kind of an action, or at least it will ...
Feb 2, 2011 -
Re: Chapter one
Just a few nit-picks: As we walked down the hall, [color=#BF0000]It was that day when i noticed him[/color], actually noticed him. I needs to be capitolized, but 'It' doesn't. And ...
Feb 2, 2011 -
Re: My Forbidden Love
Congratulations! The Lord has blessed you with a successful post! ( I liked your prayer at the begining too) I really really really LOOOOVED this!! Emensly! It's amazing. Short, sweet, ...
Feb 1, 2011 -
Re: W.R.I.T.E.R.S Ch. 1
Hey! I'm back to reveiw agian! Ok, I think this is good for a story build up, a good introduction. But not as epic as the prologe. But that's ok. ...
Feb 1, 2011 -
Re: W.R.I.T.E.R.S (Prologue)
Oh my goodness I really really love this! It feels so like a James Patterson novel. I want to read more so bad! I'm bound to get addicted! I love ...
Feb 1, 2011 -
Re: Golden Waters (a Civil War short story)
Here I am as you have requested to review! I liked your story. The Civil War is a great topic, you seem good at it. ( my topic is Early ...
Jan 31, 2011 -
Re: The Voice In My Head
I really really really LOVE this one! How amazing! It speaks a message people of the world need to hear. It's amazing! As a Christian myself, I really like it! ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: When I was young
I like your poem! Its short and sweet and cute too. I also strongly agree with it. I miss my childhood! But I do recommend some spaceing. I mean like ...
Jan 30, 2011
