TheOneWhoIsAwesome

The One Who Is Awesome thinks your story has much potential, but has several things he'd like to critique. First, your grammar needs much work. To be frank, your story ...

The One Who Is Awesome loves westerns, and this is one of the best he has ever read. Your gunslinger exudes awesome through your writing, which The One Who Is ...

Hello, Sapphira. The One Who Is Awesome thinks your story is very interesting, with a compelling concept. However, he thinks small gaps in the storytelling undermine it somewhat. First of ...