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  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: Eternal Night

    The One Who Is Awesome thinks your story has much potential, but has several things he'd like to critique. First, your grammar needs much work. To be frank, your story ...

    Mar 26, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Daisy

    The One Who Is Awesome loves westerns, and this is one of the best he has ever read. Your gunslinger exudes awesome through your writing, which The One Who Is ...

    Mar 26, 2009
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: Shattered Mirrors

    Hello, Sapphira. The One Who Is Awesome thinks your story is very interesting, with a compelling concept. However, he thinks small gaps in the storytelling undermine it somewhat. First of ...

    Mar 26, 2009


I always knew that deep down in every human heart, there is mercy and generosity. No one is born hating another person because of the color of his skin, or his background, or his religion. People must learn to hate, and if they can learn to hate, they can be taught to love, for love comes more naturally to the human heart than its opposite.
— Nelson Mandela, Long Walk to Freedom