TheNextBigThing

:| Please don't be offended, but this story could be better. There are absolutely no descreption -or anything for that matter- besides dialogue. It gets really old. It just her ...

I didn't get it :?. It was really confusing, but I think I was figuring it out by the end. Still though, you should clear it up, and make it ...

It was said he killed someone. He never went to jail because there was no proof that he actually killed the guy, so says the grapevine. Cierra Torres watched him ...

Short and sweet. I like it. It's definitely a good start, and it makes me want to read more. I don’t have much to critique on this story… Few things ...

Not big on twilight (but i can't wait for the New Moon movie to come out [Jacob Fan]), but when I saw 'Bella's 30th Birthday', it seemed like something interesting ...

I have to say, this was a bit confusing :? . I liked it, but you need to clear things up. Like who are the Mutants? Be a bit more ...

:smt038 I absolutely loved it, and there isn't much to critique on it. One thing I would do, though, is put a little bit more description in your story. It ...