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Re: When the Road Gives Way
Beautiful poem. This is TheMastermind here with a review for IronSpark I loved the nice topic and flow of the poem. Nicely related to Alice and the Wonderland. My favourite ...
May 15, 2015 -
Re: The Essence Wars - Chapter One
Wonderful start! However, I would recommend that you write longer chapters. There were a bunch of things you could have changed. The characters are beautiful and are very charactery. I ...
May 8, 2015 -
Re: The Essence Wars - Chapter One
Wonderful start! However, I would recommend that you write longer chapters.
May 8, 2015