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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: A Bike Ride

    Hey there. I don't know much about poetry but I thought this was pretty good. I don't see why you used so many unnecessary line breaks. They just seem clunky ...

    Nov 8, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Lifelessness

    That was excellent. It was captivating and mysterious. However, I wouldn't exactly say it was "frightening", if that's what you were going for. If you want to write horror, I ...

    Nov 8, 2011


You walk into this room at your own risk, because it leads to the future, not a future that will be but one that might be. This is not a new world, it is simply an extension of what began in the old one. It has patterned itself after every dictator who has ever planted the ripping imprint of a boot on the pages of history since the beginning of time. It has refinements, technological advances, and a more sophisticated approach to the destruction of human freedom. But like every one of the super states that preceded it, it has one iron rule: logic is an enemy and truth is a menace.
— Rod Serling