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Re: A Bike Ride
Hey there. I don't know much about poetry but I thought this was pretty good. I don't see why you used so many unnecessary line breaks. They just seem clunky ...
Nov 8, 2011 -
Re: Lifelessness
That was excellent. It was captivating and mysterious. However, I wouldn't exactly say it was "frightening", if that's what you were going for. If you want to write horror, I ...
Nov 8, 2011
