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Re: Someone Else
This is meant to be a rap (sort of). My teacher said I should submit it to the yearbook. What do you think? P.S. I don't really know anything about ...
Nov 8, 2011 -
Re: A Bike Ride
Hey there. I don't know much about poetry but I thought this was pretty good. I don't see why you used so many unnecessary line breaks. They just seem clunky ...
Nov 8, 2011 -
Re: Lifelessness
That was excellent. It was captivating and mysterious. However, I wouldn't exactly say it was "frightening", if that's what you were going for. If you want to write horror, I ...
Nov 8, 2011 -
Re: The Fortress of Isengard
Thanks for your input, but the whole point of a "Founded" Poem is to take the exact text of the prose and to transform it into a poem. I had ...
Oct 21, 2011 -
Re: The Fortress of Isengard
Now, before you flame me, this is a found poem, meaning it is based off a piece of prose. The section of prose is taken from J.R.R. Tolkien's "The Two ...
Oct 21, 2011 -
Re: Mmm... Mysterious...
Well if you had actually read the whole thing, you would have got a real cookie. :) Can't blame me for trying to cheat the system! And thanks for the ...
Sep 29, 2011 -
Re: Mmm... Mysterious...
Thanks ZLYF!
Sep 29, 2011 -
Re: Mmm... Mysterious...
You've met with a terrible fate, haven't you? Hello. I'm TheMaskedMan and I'm here to read and write. It's like school, except fun. Wait... NO FORGET I SAID THAT IT ...
Sep 29, 2011
