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Re: The Lifetime of a Raindrop
Oh this is so sad! It truly is beautifully written. I love the way you repeated parts, it tied it all together and made it feel whole, whilst adding a ...
Sep 14, 2010 -
Re: We Used To Be Friends
I have decided this is going to be a song, which means I will probably end up completely re-writing it to make it fit with a tune. Ah well... this ...
Sep 14, 2010 -
Re: YWS Open Mic #3 on September 12th
AAAAARRRRGGGHHH!!! I really wanted to listen to it but it's on too late! I have school in the morning. It's OK for people in America but here in the UK ...
Sep 11, 2010 -
Re: Novel covers
Sorry. Didn't know about all that. By the way, Day, I didn't understand a word of what you just said :?
Sep 10, 2010 -
Re: Piano
Thankyou! :D
Sep 10, 2010 -
Re: Your Favorite Dream.
I barely ever dream, But when I do they're always either really freaky mini-nightmares or really, really awesome. My favourite was probably when I dreamed me and my friends were ...
Sep 8, 2010 -
Re: Piano
This isn't very good, but I don't really want to change it. I didn't write it as a poem, I just let my thoughts pour out onto the page, and ...
Sep 8, 2010 -
Re: Novel covers
But you can put photos up anyway in art and photography so surely it wouldn't make a difference if you could use them as book covers? Pervs could put pervy ...
Sep 5, 2010 -
Re: I'm back!
OH MY GOD!!!! These pictures are AMAZING!!! You are a brilliant drawing-person
Sep 3, 2010 -
Re: Novel covers
Hi, is it possible to use one of your own photos as a cover for a novel? Would I be able to make design my own cover, take a picture ...
Sep 3, 2010 -
Re: Diary
I don't think I can really tell you how to improve this because, in my opinion, it's perfect already. Of course there are plenty of bits you could change, there ...
Sep 3, 2010 -
Re: Today is one of those days - edited
This is lovely. Don't listen to anyone who says otherwise. It's really cute and full of great imagery. Also, I agree with you. Write for yourself, never for your critics.
Sep 3, 2010 -
Re: really bad....
Definitely keep drawing. You said you did these about a year ago? These are pretty good for a twelve-year-old's doodles. I think you could be a really great artist if ...
Sep 3, 2010 -
Re: Confessions
Hahahahaha! oh, oh this is brilliant. I love it.
Sep 3, 2010 -
Re: A Single Bullet
I always thought that when I died, I would see the world slow down. But that metal in my chest, made me glade what?! it went by fast. I wasn't ...
Sep 3, 2010
