TheLonleyJester

So I wrote this short scene for my Theater Productions class. Tell me what you think. Ashley: When the announcement came on that someone had a gun in the school, ...

I thought that it was well writen. It was rather strange considering she was older then a small child. I agree with Twit in that you should add details. Other ...

Cinematic techniques help a movie become more entertaining therefore everyone uses them. Different elements can create different moods. Directors all have unique styles of making movies. Tim Burton us

I really enjoyed this poem. Maybe it is because I am obsessed with Alice and Wonderland but I truly do think that it is well written. I am eager to ...

Chapter 1 Bailey Coming out of the closet is probobly the worst desision I have ever made. I should have known this asshole infested world would judge me for something ...

This poem is very true. Overall I liked it and completely agreed. There is one thing that I thought just didn't flow. The terraces the best viewing For a fight, ...

This is John McCain. Most people thought he was lame. We voted for Obama, then he cried to his mama and then sat down in shame.

I liked it. I think it was very short but very good. I think that you could add a lot more to the song and there is also one thing ...

Poetry is like a Da Vinci painting. When you look you are astounded by the beauty. You stare in awe at the mystifying sight. Then you realize something, Its not ...

Verse 1 Butterfly Ill hold you tight, Butterfly please don't cry, Cause your beautiful in my eyes, So Chorus Butterfly don't let your wings break, Butterfly don't fly away. Butterfly ...

I loved it! I read the entire thing and loved every second of it. I just really would like greater detail of the freak. If you ever get this published ...