TheLonelyBones

No trust or honour, No rule of thumb; One man’s conquest An others fun. Meaningless nights They wither away. My troubled soul No place to stay. I offer my heart, ...

Very good job Lorna, I found this poem truely moving and you have capture the essence of your friends heartbreak superbly! Unfortunate for your friend to go through such pain ...

This is best thing I have read all day! I really enjoyed this piece of work and believe is one of our best pieces so far. It reminds me of ...

Hey I thought this was a good attempt at a song, the chorus is catchy and everything seems to flow well. However, you know your reading a good song when ...

Hey this is a good attempt at a first poem, although like everyone else im strugling to understand what the poem is all about? It does not seem to go ...

Woah, you are clearly very talented and I love this poem very much. This poem made me feel both warm "your hands underneath my clother" and cold "My flesh begin ...

I gave you my heart To mend and repair Something you said "Will take time and care" But now Im left here With no heart at all Waiting, wanting, wondering ...