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Re: The Stingrays: The Guraz's Revenge (Prologue)
The captain is the antagonist of the story. i probably should have said something about it in the writing to let people know the story isn't based around him. But ...
Jul 3, 2013 -
Re: The Stingrays: The Guraz's Revenge (Prologue)
Thanks for your advice. The main story is actually based around a human a millennium later and the space captain is the main antagonist of the story but i really ...
Jul 3, 2013 -
Re: It's Not You, but It Isn't Me, Either
An amazing piece of poetry! I really like all the description and the detail within the piece. You varied using different literary terms and that's very unique. I praise you ...
Jul 1, 2013 -
Re: Sleeping Beauty
It is an amazing piece. U rymed a couple times but need to ryme a bit more to catch the eye.
Jul 1, 2013