TheIllusionist

I agree with the first after-post. The old wording gives more of a Tolkien-esk feel to the lyrycism as the lines progressed. The rarity increased in a dramatic turn due ...

Hello ,and thank you for the review. I am at a point of cunfusion as to why you found it not very clear from the beginning as the poem's plot, ...

I agree, you will have to forgive me. The day I wrote this, my fictional writing on the piece was becoming wasteful and i decided to try it in a ...