TheIllusionist

I agree, an excellent poem. The fact that you symbolize both development, and the end of said development (which is commanly forgotten by many writers symbolising such objectisisym) is breathtaking. ...

The light to fade The cold cruel malace A long tributer Alas the veil And upon himself he said, "And now, the debt to pay Along the shores of Grey ...

I only can give a non-professional opinion as I, as well, am learning the opening steps that dramatic poetry provides us. You kept the poem free verse, witch, I personally ...

Though I am here for a review, I prefer to stay steadfast to the greater importance of the story, the plot. Grammer, as the other reviewers, could have been a ...