TheIllusionist

Now, I know it's not long, but I tried. The boy walked most curiously through the pathway, his mind lingering on thoughts not thought for many years. The path was ...

I am stunned in your grace Matt, the poem is truly a ingenious work of art. It turns the words to feelings, feelings into abilities, and from there it is ...

I do so hate to make the message board sound like a borken record, but I am nothing short of stunned at how you gave this poem the life you ...

When all might fail and Mountains crumble, when Tyrants fall and Hillsides tumble, Where might you wish you had been that night, but A quiet evening in the rain?

Though, yes it could have been a bit more gracious to the genre of creepy, it fuffiled the standaard of a good read. It proved to be kindling toward truth ...

I am simply estatic at the fact that there are still those of us who can actually comrehend that there does not need to be profanity or gore to be ...

I agree with the first after-post. The old wording gives more of a Tolkien-esk feel to the lyrycism as the lines progressed. The rarity increased in a dramatic turn due ...

Hello ,and thank you for the review. I am at a point of cunfusion as to why you found it not very clear from the beginning as the poem's plot, ...

The corruptiance of the courts will file against the man as retraction of the lawful finds a cleaner slate. A stage set for the broken failed morality and saved immortality ...

Well, that didn't necessarily mean that it was not a good use of poetry. Isn't poetry simply random chaos in the mind that can be set and described as blah ...

I agree, you will have to forgive me. The day I wrote this, my fictional writing on the piece was becoming wasteful and i decided to try it in a ...

And as he was walking, he came upon stone not rare, not new, but a simple pile of stone. And in this stone laid naught but rubble with life , ...

I personally enjoyed how you kept the dialouge flowing throughout the characters, and not just one. I have seen many writers fin themselves unappropriatly shuffling dialouge back and forth between ...

The Grain and Soul to be renewed, At once a reign of life Not the pain of death, nor the pain of loss, and yet nor the pain of gain ...

Interesting, as I personally find that people tend to write without any type of humor. That, surprises us all as Humor is simply a higher form of Joy and Sorrow, ...