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You could have put more description in this. And the grammar was a little off, but that could easily be fixed. But I also think that the way you portrayed ...

i like it. its nice and rings love. Its nice how it shows how he's changed since she's entered into his life. How the world has changed. and how she ...

I really like this. Its soft and warm and makes me think of sunshine on my cheeks. But there are parts that I don't understand. Like the part about the ...