TheGuiltyOne

If I say "Hey Dogs", it will sound like I am cursing you :P So yes, hey there! :D You are a Phantom it seems, that saunters my dreams. Wandering ...

This is an amazing piece. It has everything- You portrayed perfect emotions! However, the lack of punctuations was a problem. Caress me whereas I do not veil This is the ...

Hahaha! This poem reflects perfect hatred and man, I enjoyed reading this. However, as I started reading, the lack of punctuations pricked me. Time to review ;D I love you ...

Hey there :) I found this piece a little bit cheesy... But perhaps I am just not the "love" type. I liked the way you didn't complicate things for the ...

Good job here :D

An edited version - In the land of the forsaken, You walk with honest belief in your heart. No one to seek, Because of the blood in their hands. Once ...

First time ever, I am writing stuff as such.. I hope you guys enjoy it :) Like a tornado your life likes to play with you with it's finger tips. ...

This piece has a great message hidden behind it. Good job :) But, you have problems with your punctuations and few grammatical errors which you have already figured out. Not ...

Great idea but needs more work. A writer must know how to grab the attention of the reader and in order to do that, you should have described the killing ...

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I LOVE every discussion related to this topic and this is an amazing work (Y)! I just wish I'd have another chance to stand next to you while it rains, ...

Amazing :D

The decaying soul has stopped whispering, The reason and the cause is still a mystery. Why is the door to humanity suddenly shut? You ask yourself with mere disgust. Another ...

I love the whole idea of it and bless the poem :D However, I would've liked it better if this was longer with punctuations. Punctuation marks are vital. Walking at ...

I lay here on a rotting bed, Where others have also decayed. Now it's my turn to fade off. Am I ready to face what's ahead? No matter how hard ...