TheGreatBronsteeny

I'm right with dante93 on this one. I usually flip out about punctuation in poems, but the lack of it here helps it flow better. Amazing work you've created here! ...

I'm actually right with you on the poetry thing. I just sort of wrote it down during a flash of inspiration. Well, the rough outline, anyway. I added the details ...

Wind like the hand of God himself, swirled around me and threatened to consume me Yet it was not like the Lord at all, for it was more evil than ...

Hello, I'm Bryan, I will be your reviewer for this afternoon. OK, for starters, there were a LOT of spelling errors. And a few grammatical mistakes (which I understand is ...

I know I'll never know what goes on in a teenage girls brain. This "poem" just backs up my hypothesis. Please take this as constructive criticism. I hate this. It ...

Thank you so much for your review! I know there isn't a lot to work with for reviewing, I'm just kind of setting up the whole thing from here. I've ...

How true this is! I really like this one, because its so easy to relate to. He comes to all of us at one time or another, but you have ...

I love this poem. Granted, it's short and I know I've seen something along these lines before, but GREAT job either way. I think I like it so much because ...

Hey there, lets get right down to reviewing this Positives -I really like your descriptions of certain scenes and people such as: I cowered in my room and listened as ...

Thanks a bunch for the feedback! I didn't proofread that one too much so a few errors was a lot less than I expected. Glad you like it! Working on ...

Wow, just wow. I must say, I NEED THOSE NEXT CHAPTERS! I haven't been this hooked by fiction since Chris d' Lacey's The Fire Within. Your story sounds a lot ...

Sounds Great! I am also a serious christian, so this is pretty interesting. Will it in any way be tied in with Revelation or something like the Left Behind series?

OK, so this isn't exactly the story, just the first page i recently finished. PLEASE leave feedback, good or bad, thanks! Day 3. Drowning most of the grief in vodka ...

Hello there, I suppose it's time to review this bad boy. I honestly thought this was just another story of little kids getting into trouble and then the scolding from ...

Hey every one! I'm a HUGE newbie to the whole writing stories and such. I'm looking to make friends and and get advice