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Re: The Unknown Game-1
Slowly I sat up, Poor way to start, it's the horrible ly word "slowly". holding my aching head. I felt as though it had been slammed against a rock twenty ...
Jun 10, 2010 -
Re: An Untitled Prologue
Okay,I didn't want to be selfish and post my story without reviewing others, so here goes. I'm bad at reviewing work that isn't mine, but I'll give it a go. ...
Jun 9, 2010 -
Re: (Name to be determined) A short story
I'm not going to tear this apart because I don't have that much time, but here are a few pointers. 1, You need to space your paragraphs. Nobody wants to ...
Jun 7, 2010